just another night,
spent thinking of you,
in my eyes,
just another night...
just another night,
when eyelids refused to close,
dreams refused to come,
eyes refused to see,
the darkness of night outside,
because my heart was so enlightened,
with the memories of you it has archived,
my mind was so excited,
to see the flash-backs so lively and enchanted,
my pulse was running fast,
to relive the every moment, cherished in the past,
my breaths were long, my breaths were deep,
to dont let go the fragrance of you, it wanted to keep,
with so much to feel,
with so much going on,
how could i have kept,
my eyes closed tight,
just another night,
spent thinking of you,
in my eyes,
just another night....
spent thinking of you,
in my eyes,
just another night...
just another night,
when eyelids refused to close,
dreams refused to come,
eyes refused to see,
the darkness of night outside,
because my heart was so enlightened,
with the memories of you it has archived,
my mind was so excited,
to see the flash-backs so lively and enchanted,
my pulse was running fast,
to relive the every moment, cherished in the past,
my breaths were long, my breaths were deep,
to dont let go the fragrance of you, it wanted to keep,
with so much to feel,
with so much going on,
how could i have kept,
my eyes closed tight,
just another night,
spent thinking of you,
in my eyes,
just another night....
(20/12/11)
I stumbled across your page via link to the DAMS article. Been exploring your work. Just a humble suggestion- As an avid reader, I love to read something that captures my imagination; but however beautiful prose or poetry might be, it gets really off putting to read it in the text-message lingo. So using 'because' instead of 'coz' and 'and' instead of the easy 'n' might just do wonders to your work. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the suggestion.... Will keep this in mind in my future posts...
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